Thoughts on an odd tie

[Nick]

There is a two-fold reason it doesn't look "quite right":
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(2) The overall look is a pastiche, and like most pastiches it doesn't work. The wing collar is far too large (it looks like a regular collar folded over), as is the knot in the tie. Instead of looking Vicorian or Edwardian, the result comes off looking too theatrical, to "made up".

The collar also is not starched well, it's drooping.