Potential Family Tartan Critique

[Grizzly]

Thanks for your views I have tweaked the design along your suggested route, A subtle difference but accentuating the purple. Is it any better?



Kind regards
Simon

[CMcG]

That does look better... to me anyway

The only problem is that the changes compressed the design a bit. I think it needs to have the dark green background (flanking the bunch of thin stripes) enlarged to give it more of a sense of space...