Okay Allen,
you asked for it. It looks quite good, but is lacking some meat in the middle. It seems like you're frustration towards MSM and the bravehearts vs. freestylers arguement is carried over. In Education you mention that kilts are men's garments and we are not cross dressers. Of course we aren't, but if it sounds like you are arguing it, people wonder why. Solution don't mention the negative. Focus on the positive. Most people see kilts as strong male garments. The layout is nice and the menu is nicely layed out, but it does take up a fair bit of the page. I would be inclined to ditch the menu, and just have arrows to the next page. You doesn't really give a history for the Ladies from Hell. Have a look at Kilts R 4 guys' (from Tom's) site at www.geocities.com/lfhchiHe lists a large amout of history about kilts, the name, and the organization. You want to inspire pride within people in order for them to want to join. Again focus on the positve. If guys think they will meet resistance they are less inclined to do it, but if someone is telling them all the great stuff first men can be persuaded. Oh, and a few different pictures (do Google search there are tons) would be nice. Having the same photo blurs the line between pages.

All in all a good presentation. Powerpoint can be difficult and frustrating, but it is easy once you get the hang of it. Keep it up.

Colin