For a second kilt I think you did a fine job. Well done! Give that bad boy a good steam/press and wear it proudly.

You mention that you think it looks a little odd. I think it might be that really wide waistband. To my eye it kinda interrupts the shape of the kilt. I tried heavy waistbands like that a few times and didn't have very good luck with fit either. Maybe for your next one try going narrower, like 1.5" or so. Did your waist measurement end up a bit small? It looks like it's pulling a bit in the front photo, though maybe the apron just needs to be smoothed down.

Have you started planning the next one? Every kilt you make gets better. Keep at it!