Not too bad... Your closures are pretty good but the aspect ratio is far too high for my tastes but to each his own I suppose. You should try one using 16g 1/4"ID Spring stainless next time, that should prove very informational. I'd post pictures of the one I did but I sold it before I had the chance... don't ya hate that?
I have a small side business making maille jewelry and such but, making the same old Half Persian necklaces and bracelets, and the Euro chokers and the elfsheet bracelets.... well you get the idea, it all has me fairly burned out. I'm currently working on an inlay of the Aum in bright aluminum and black anodized aluminum to relieve some of the burn out.
I could discuss this subject with fellow maille-smiths for a while so I'll shut up for now...