Need a little advice

[Bugbear]

Well, you make it pretty clear that you will work with the people involved to craft the whole thing around there ideas, so I don't know what you would add. I can't comment on any of the visual things about the site, but it sounded fine. Although, I didn't see anything about the feast of gluttony, firewalking in bunny pajamas, and public face tatooing... Sorry, Nighthawk, I had to get one joke in there.