So how is this?

[McMurdo]

Not bad, might I suggest loosing the fly plaid, to me and I'm sure some others will agree a fly plaid is just a bit over the top. As well if you can get another colour hose that would be great, the white to my eye anyway look like either you are piper or you just rented everything. When budget allows I'd steer clear of the Sport Kilt for formal events, it may be fine if you're the only one in the room wearing a kilt, however you'll stick out at a Burns Supper.

PS
One other small detail, I'd suspect you are wearing a clip on bow tie, now it is a little thing but if you can master a self tie bow tie that one detail helps quite a bit. I've found this video to be excellent

[davedove]

I kind of like fly plaids, but I do agree they agree they can be a bit much, so I don't wear one all the time, even when going formal.

I agree about the hose, although others will say white is fine. I just think that there are so many colors that would work well, why stick with white.

Of course, with a lovely lady on your arm, who cares about any of that.