Gentlemen, thank you one and all for your responses. I have taken your advice to heart, and will adjust as needed. I've been doing a LOT of reading on here, and have learned a fair bit already. It's rare that you can find a group that is so willing to help a total stranger. Must be "the power of the kilt" I've heard about!
"My beloved America, thank you for your children. If your children want to become soldiers I will train them. When they are hungry I will feed them. When they are thirsty I will give them water. When they fight for freedom I will lead them. When they are unsteady on the battlefield I will motivate them. If they die on the battlefield I will bury them. So help me God."
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