How about a bullet point summary of the steps? I have a hard time following instructions embedded in paragraph narratives. When I'm following along and then doing something step-by-step, I find I lose my place and have to reread a whole page to find it or, I find myself rereading the same paragraph over and over just to find my next step. And, it's gotten worse with wearing glasses.

Otherwise, I'm with everyone else, MORE PICS! or cowbell....