how does this look?

[English Bloke]

Looks OK to me but the Kilt belt looks a little too formal. Try the same look with a "58 pattern belt" or similar. Type it into ebay search, there's a few and they are not too expensive.

[Nervous Jock]

Looks OK to me but the Kilt belt looks a little too formal. Try the same look with a "58 pattern belt" or similar. Type it into ebay search, there's a few and they are not too expensive.

Or 37 or 44 with brasses